tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8134017339486140171.post7392282339977308128..comments2010-10-16T21:17:46.233-07:00Comments on Outcries Of A Frustrated Mind: Dreams Lost In Oblivion....Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06462005063359462856noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8134017339486140171.post-27807111065720321702009-03-31T20:26:00.000-07:002009-03-31T20:26:00.000-07:00Great Work n Great rhyme scheme.One of your best p...Great Work n Great rhyme scheme.<BR/><BR/>One of your best posts so far. I guess u took 3 characters in 3 different situations. <BR/>One advice from my side would be - You could have made ballad out of this post. Include a series of events in only one single character who had many dreams to pursue but his/her dreams was lost in oblivion.<BR/><BR/>Maybe u can use this idea in ur next post..but i really loved the thought behind this 1. <BR/><BR/>Keep Blogging !<BR/><BR/>*Cheers*Nickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10486056980016692397noreply@blogger.com